The Fan Fiction Project

Two people are reading my fan fiction project for the Myst/Uru universe. It was my Nanowrimo project and introduces a new game Age called M'nine. One has finished it and given me his comments.

Based on his suggestions, I'm going to write an introduction to the game and the characters within it. Even he, who has played the game for a long time, had a hard time at first keeping track of the characters introduced. I do have a section for the characters in an appendix. I may use that and move it up to the front with the introduction.

I have a couple of friends who haven't played the game at all. I may have them read the introduction after I'm finished to see if it flows well.

Another option is that if this is just to be offered online as a pdf download, is to refer the reader to a link where Ellen has already created an introduction to the game. Still have to introduce the Friends of the Fissure part of it and those characters, but it would be shorter.