Dagan's Dilemma

In PoM, Dagan is troubled by guilt. And that guilt needs to give Dithron an edge. I know this. I know what caused the guilt. But I don't have what edge this gives Dithron, or how it stops Dagan from being effective. This has been in the plans for years, but I still don't have the 'how' of it. And it's bothering me. Now that I'm into the book this far, I need to know.

I'm also changing the Sol Nomen a bit. Instead of the bulky body structure that makes them too dwarfish or hobbit-like, I'm going to give them the body type of pygmy people.

Mainly in PoM, I'm making notes on changes, additions, thoughts, etc. I did have to stop and do some actual writing on a scene which will happen in the book after PoM. It was too fresh in my mind to wait. That book has been coming to me lately and will probably have an outline or synopsis appear in the next month or two.

I'm trying to get through my two chapters per day on TKQ revisions. That seems about the right amount that I get time for, but only just - with everything else that has to be done.

There are also some non-fiction reports in the works. One's coming together very well, and I have ideas on a few of them. I think they will be good candidates to break up into smaller bits and use in different areas.